AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Of Butterflies in a Hurricane

by roxierose13

schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh so awesomely sweet!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry did it! I sooo need chapter 33!
person me
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good story so far...I don't think I've ever reviewed...so dont worry about this story! Its awesome
person QueenB
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 32 Wow, that was one electrifying battle. There were moments when I was genuinely confused and didn't know what was happening. I suppose that's what would happen on a real battefield. The aftermath with Blaise and Severus was a little odd and I'm not entirely sure how Draco ended up where he did. But I'm sure you'll straighten it out.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 32! Harry can't lose Hermione too!
person QueenB
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 31 Yes, I remembered that Nagini was dead (sometimes I lose track of these things when stories get as long as this). But Harry is up against difficult odds now. Even for a boy who killed a giant basilisk before he was old enough to shave is going to find this tough going.
person bluefirex
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh So close!!! cliffhangers are so not fair!
person QueenB
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 31 I understand how Draco feels. Somehow you think that everything would be fine if they could be with each other. They could put their heads together, pool their information and find a way to deal with the various people on their trails. Harry could use his affections now. Hermione's grief means that he has to put his feelings aside and that's never easy.

I love the interplay that you have going on among the different characters. That scene with Draco eavesdropping on Neville was riveting and tense. I look forward to future chapters.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 31!!! Very smart of Draco to use the false trail!!!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 30!!!