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aww why ron!?

What the F*ck just happened!? Why did u kill Ron?....!!!!!!DH SPOILER AHEAD!!!!!!!.......It was an unnecessary death like Colin Creevey and Hedwig!!!! Its like whats the point! Sure you want to show how the war is awful and people die and its horrible but its RON! JK didn't even have the balls to kill Ron. Okay i really like your fic and all, i love the horcrux hunt and its all very interesting but i really feel that the Ron's death was stupid and it really doesn't benefit the story at all. Plus if your going to write a fic with such a main character death you should really warn the readers before hand that it might happen. It would decrease the amount of people that read your fic but then you'd realize that main character death in a fanfic is never a good idea unless they actually died in the series.

You fic was well written, but the ending was extremely anticlimactic! I found Ron's death unnecessary, and the small mention of Rose at the end was insulting to her character. You made such a big deal about her before and didn't even write a decent ending scene with her and Harry. Hermione 'moving on' seems so rushed aswell like her best friend and possibly more just died and her other best friend as a lover while someone who could have been hers is dead. Voldermort's death as i mentioned was anitclimactic, and the discovery of Snape's actual loyalty as much as you say you didn't copy anything from DH the familiarity leaves me wondering otherwise. My favourite part of your entire fic would be the fact that Draco had is own little mini adventure even though it was short and you didn't really focuss on it as much. Your fic seemed like a mini HP novel with a splash of slash instead of a completely involved HP/DM slash fanfic, even though there were sex scenes (that were pretty good but very similar to each other) they seemed to only be there because its 'supposed' to be a slash fic even though the story could have ran without it. Anyway the main annoying thing about this fic has nothing to do with the fic itself but your constant bagery for comments. Honestly people reading aren't required by law to leave a comment. Anyway this is the end of my comment.

P.S You shouldn't Have KILLED RON!

I really love your fic so far, this new character Rose is very interesting.

Thanks for the bruliant storry! It was great to read something what isn't based on the 7th book.I don't realy like it.
I realy had a reat time with your story!

Thanks again!

Ch. 33 Awww, happy endings and hot sex. What more could any m/m slash fan want? ;D

I am soooo going to miss this! Fantastic story!!!

wow. I'm so proud that you stuck through it and continued posting, with no little amount of poking and prodding from me....

anyway, it was a fabulous way to end it. HOT MAN SEX!! yay! you fulfilled my one wish.

Honestly, this is what the epilogue SHOULD have been.

i'll leave a longer review when forever fandom decides to work again.

so great....sucha lovely ending!

Outstanding. I read heartily until the end. I was surprised Harry and Draco didn't have any them time in the story but for the flashbacks...you still made it work and feel loving.

I have one personal bias!!! Why did Ron have to die. He is my FAVORITE HP character. I think most people see him as this extraordinarily stupid or angry red haired beast. I think the Wizard's chess, the ability to see details that other people can't, and his talent for pressing through inane circumstances makes him the most practically wise of all 3 main characters. The fanfiction does not agree as far as I can read, but I still thinks he has more than a little something something.

Genna