rate_review Reviews

Excellent story with sparse sentences full of feelings. Will look for your other stories.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow! That was beautiful! I have tears in my eyes from that. I heard the voices, I felt like I was there! This story shall remain in my favourites. Is there going to be more? I would so like a follow up!

Your story shines brightly like a new star on this website where most other stories portraying this ship have glaring grammatical errors, trite characterization, incoherent and often disorganized paragraphs and plot sequences, and very bad descriptions of the interactions between Snape and Hermione. Thank you for such a wonderful little piece that gives me hope that there are still a few new authors out there who can actually write something of worth. I would suggest you submit this story to one of the other SS/HG archives out there as well...such as Ashwinder or the Petulant Poetress. Looking forward to more of your work in the future!

Excellent! I hope you dont stop there, that was fantastic!

Oh I like it, very much. What a high tensioned tempatured chapter. I didn't just like it, I loved it!! More soon please. Best wishes.

aww i liked it alot. and what was the question he wanted to ask? are u continuing? i am curious now. good job.

continue it enough to see how he asks the question, her responce and everyones reaction. I loved it and I want to know what happons next.

What a lovely story. You have a lovely writing style.Reading the story I had feelings of peace and dignity. It felt quite spiritual. Your English is excellent. It is difficult to believe that it is not your first language.
Please continue to write