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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that story was just..basically amazing. keep writing..your a kick ass writer.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was clever and fun and very well written. The "best friends with benefits" angle was nicely done. I'd say this story seems to beg for a sequel (especially after Harry was thinking "she's mine, all mine!" but of course, that's up to you.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, that was definitely hot and I think my panties will never be the same again. haha! I LOVED it! Please write more H/Hr fiction because this was one steamy, smutty lemon. Excellent characters and situation. Love it love it love it!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite good story, love the smutt and the way Harry and Hermione develop their atracction and still keep their friendship.
Also quite nice to leave an open ending, I just hope that you can make another chapter (or sequel) soon, maybe with Hermione and Harry "studing" some advanced techinques? or just acepting the obvious that they can be together better than with Ron and Ginny.
Any way is a good fic and I hope to read more of your works soon.
JO
Also quite nice to leave an open ending, I just hope that you can make another chapter (or sequel) soon, maybe with Hermione and Harry "studing" some advanced techinques? or just acepting the obvious that they can be together better than with Ron and Ginny.
Any way is a good fic and I hope to read more of your works soon.
JO
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW it was a perfect story, so hot and sweet at the same time and the end was a little funny! Great work!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! i luvd it. i hope it wasnt just a one-shot.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome! r u gonna write more? i hope they fall in love