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April 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was quite sexy, at times funny, fairly in character, and certainly enjoyable.
Most Excellent.
Most Excellent.
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December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
FUN STORY! I really, really enjoyed reading this and I think you did a great job capturing Hermione's character and Harry's natural hesitation. I also thought that you did a great job with the !smut! It's never, ever easy to write a good and convincing scene and I think you succeeded. Looking forward to seeing more from you!
Regards,
the_scribbler
Regards,
the_scribbler
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH YES! Practice does make perfect and now I have a perfectly sore right wrist *chuckles*
This fic? ABSOLUTELY great.
Good writing job.
This fic? ABSOLUTELY great.
Good writing job.
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was rec'd here by phoenixwriter and I am sure glad I came! (no pun intended *g*) I have read many smut stories over the years and so many of them are so clich
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story...one word to describe it...
Perfect!
You took what Rowling wrote and brought it to the next step, with all of the innocence and unpredictability of teenagers. It felt like a missing chapter from HBP, if that was the angle you were aiming for...coupled with the possessive attitude Harry had in it. I look forward to what you do with DH after it comes out.
Perfect!
You took what Rowling wrote and brought it to the next step, with all of the innocence and unpredictability of teenagers. It felt like a missing chapter from HBP, if that was the angle you were aiming for...coupled with the possessive attitude Harry had in it. I look forward to what you do with DH after it comes out.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hallo CiraArana!
Super story! Ich kenn ja nicht mal die Harry Potter B
Super story! Ich kenn ja nicht mal die Harry Potter B
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Left me wondering at the end though. I was hoping it would end more towards Harry and hermione both recognize their love for one another. I hope you wite a sequel like that. Not sure whether you might though just hope u do. Please if its no bother mail me at harryandhermi@yahoo.com if you add future chapters or write another hhr story. Thanks.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fantastic story but it is still somewhat ambiguous as who hermione decides to end up with as i'm damn anxious and need complete confirmation to do with any sort of hhr.
absolutely brilliant but please say harry and hermione get together after that, not just some secret that harry took ron's future gf's cherry. :( i hate rhr!!! yukky!
absolutely brilliant but please say harry and hermione get together after that, not just some secret that harry took ron's future gf's cherry. :( i hate rhr!!! yukky!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story and would be a perfect story for a second chapter. I mean those two belong together and for more than just practice. Great work!