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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person Kris
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ron needs to die! Or for Severus to show him where he stands... XD
person firewall
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 32 - You've made Hermione so frail and yet so strong. You can't help but root for her. Where the heck was Ron's head? He needs a kick in the butt and perhaps Severus should give him one.
person kate
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Goddess divine. Another brilliant chapter, please don't make us wait so long for the next! I do love it so.
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Ron should get his ass kicked. :)
person pickles87
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH I wish you would have continued Sev and Draco's conversation. Or what they were discussing. I guess it was about the potion, but would have liked more interaction. thank you for a new chapter. It was great.
person angel
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ma ron you great prat how could you go along with it knowing it would hurt mione.... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person CB13
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up, there, MrsSnape, the story is good and original, the characters are believable, and the plot transitions are interesting. Thank you!
person allie
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person Kate
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, Aphrodite. That last bit made my boyfriend look at me queerly because of the giggles. I think you did a superb job, however...you know whats coming don't you dearest?...Update. Yes yes, another one begging for something more that the amazing fiction you already provide us with. That said, I can't tell you how desperately I want to see the resolution to this fic. Not only in the case of the who poisoned the flowers, or the will Snarky-Pants ever marry Hermione, but also the question, will they ever be able to successfully have a child. I can not wait, be quick dearest, for should you take too long to update, my writers' block may return and my reviews will get considerably less eloquent and entirely too violent. My best.
person Queen Celestia
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So how did Amy make that potion?