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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person *DB*
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@34, Aww children say the cutest things sometimes. loved the chapter. update soon
person pickles87
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
would this have anything to do with the potion hermione took? would it or could the effects of hermione been transferred to the new mrs krum?
waiting for more. good chapter.
person Lydia
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't beleive that Amy is pregnet. it's not fair that she can and Hermione can't. Severus needs to come up with something to help. thia is really good, please post more soon.
person Amanda
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whos pregnant and why did she drop the charges, oh this is not cool. you have to update soon. please!!!!!im begging you.
person Lady Lynn
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how the hell did she get pregnant i would like to know. another wonderful chapter though it really sucks that hermione has to go through so much crap.... but if she didnt i guess you wouldnt have a story so i'll just end with happy writing.
person takemeaway
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG NO WAY!!! Who's the Daddy? I didn't get the impression that she and Severus had been having sex at all, and Viktor is sterile! How did this happen? That bitch does not deserve to have another precious baby!!
person Ava Allen
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no... this is not Severus` child ??? I hope not.
person Wolfie
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleasepleaseplease continue.PLEASE
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Oooo! I cannot wait for the next chapter! :)
person firewall
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I guess I'm a vindictive bitch but I'd kick Amy's ass. Hermione is too understanding. Grrr. Go Severus.