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Severus is such a crappy father. Teach him Hermione!

hmmmmmmm. O.o next chapter please.

man .. that poor little girl ... poor sev he is so clueless..hmm mione you should dump krum ....... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

angel

awwww that poor baby. unwanted by her own mother. I feel so sad for her. but I am glad she has Hermione. Perhaps things will change soon. and Viktor will be gone lol I think Hermione should just belt it out and tell him he's sterile lol. but perhaps he may beat her if she did. that would be bad.I love it so far. please update soon. it's nice.and I so want to see what happens with poor Corrin if she'll get a new mommy and if things between her and her father get better. I hope poor Corrin doesn't die. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND GOODLUCK.oops caps sorry.

A cliffhanger! Must have another update, I cannot wait to see what happens next.

great chap, I think Severus may be coming around but he definately needs to step up to the plate and be a better father. (however he is atleast trying) Now Amy, oh where to begin, she is the reason why birth control was invented, if you dont want kids dont have them, man does she irk me. And Victor needs to remove his head from his six (a$$) and realize that to have a kid both parties need to have functioning equipment, so as a first step both parties in the relationship should go and visit a Dr who deals with such things (and yes I realize Hermione has already done this but since Victor doesnt now they should go together). So to sum it all up I really like your story.

So I'll get off my soap box now and you can go back to your regular programing.

Another good chapter. I like where this is going, and keep up the good work!

=O Man life in this story is currently crap! :)

great chapter, I like that Sev is missing the laughter :D and the nerve of Viktor! blaming hermione for his low sperm count hehe :D I do like the wife character she is such a shrew!

another great chapter, this is developing nicely. I look forward to the next one