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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eep! I hope the child is alright. Excellent chapter!
person Bella Snape
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, I love SS/HG, and I want to see more of this story.
person lisa
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so sweet. and I think it's wonderful. Poor Hermione she has her work cut out for her. and uggg that damn Amy is a poor excuse for a mother. I understand though that just some mom's dont have the capacity to put their child above theirselves. it happens sadly. Just that poor girl. and Sverus right now is no better with his cold indifference however he at least knew to g et help. and he does care it seems. Hopefully Hermione will show them both how to heal and love one another. and maybe even become Corrin's step mom. that would be wonderful. everyone needs love.
person firewall
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Severus really made a poor selection of wife. Hmm maybe she'll party too hearty....

Viktor is a jerk. I hope that Hermione loses her grip and lets him know he is infertile. I'd love to see his face.
person prettydelial
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally into this story, and can't wait for the next installment :)
person angel
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww that was great .. mione is teaching sev how to take care of corrin.... i love that she told krum of in front of sev .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe! How cute! Excellent chapter.
person takemeaway
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely chapter. I look forward to the next. I think a conversation between Severus and Hermione about what he witnessed between she and Krum is in order.
person aleja21
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chap. i loved how hermoine just walked out on krum, cause he deserved it, he's been acting like a complete bastard. And I'm loving the fact that Snape is making an effort with his daughter. he's taking baby steps which is fine cause one does have to walk before you can run.
person prettydelial
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Severus has a chance of being a good father after all!