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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person SnapesPet30
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh oh the cats out of the bag now!
person angel
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm maybe now she will sign the papers..please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Barbara
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOPS!!
person Lydia
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe you stoped there! please post soon. i NEED to know what will happen. i hpe Hermione will give him a chance.
person pickles87
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh no not another cliffie.. that's getting mean.
too bad Hermione hasn't gotten the point that the little girl realises her mom isn't around and doesn't want bothered. that's why she drew the pictures without her mom.
yes and the screaming banshee is back.. mmm will this make her sign the papers. probably not. she would stay to torture sev some more.
waiting for more of this wonderful story. p
person Kris
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! XD
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OO! What a cliffhanger! I hope you update quickly, I cannot wait to see what happens next!
person Potatolumpkin
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story! You've got a really great, original plot going, and I'm enjoying rooting against Amy. The only thing that stuck in my mind was that Amy committed a fairly serious crime and no one bothered to report it. I mean, if the wizarding world is anything like the real one, attempted murder of one's child would definitely be a crime you go to jail for and grounds for a divorce regardless of consent. Keep writing! I can't wait to see more!
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update!! update!! update!! update!! That was evil!
person cearrae
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello. It gets right annoying where we should choose to review. What the hey, I'm here. Loved it - Hermione needs a head shake. Come on - I bet she and Snape have a bambino... yeah?