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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person firewall
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too, too cute. I enjoyed every single chapter. Merci.
person Marti
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL I loved the ending......reminds me of when my daughter looked at her little brother and asked why he had an extra little leg! great story can't wait to read more from you

marti
person lady89
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool love it cts please
person Alyson Diaz
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaawwww, that is so sweeeeet. I love your story!
person msvanessa
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! That was fantastic. I loved the ending.
person Heksy
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a twist of events.
Wonderful, you did it again.
Only one thing...I noticed Corrin saying "'coz".
I don't know why, but that bothers me somehow.
It doesn't seem to fit.
Ah well...the rest of the chapter makes more then up for it ;)
person Ava Allen
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooo....please, don`t write the epiloque yet !!! There is so many things to write. Hermione is pregnant... I want to know how it will be... when Hermione want ice cream in the middle in the night :-D
person allie
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person lisa
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww !!!!!! I am soooo happy. Beautufl cahppie. finally Hermione can have the child she soo wanted. awwww. Brought tears to ym eyes. and Severus has been soo wonderful. I knew he'd change his mind when he saw it was her only chance. now that's love. Soo sweet. and lol funny proposal. so silly but cute. I cant wait for the next chappie/epilogue. Goodluck. and great job. I will Miss reading the next chappie. A really wonderful story and I always enjoyed looking for an update. please update soon.
person Citten
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay that was ausme! totally cool! and about bloody time for her to have her happiness(please i am assumeing that you are going to be nice and let them have the baby) now wedding and fun stuff right? well update soon and let us have the story continue!