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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person lisa
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first part was sweet with Corrin. and lo go figure Ron is always hungry. Omg though Lucius!!! Poor Hermione and Poor Narcissa she needs to go to Dumbledore. and Severus doesn't even know Hermione's missing now. I can't wait to see what happens. Malfoy must be insane to think he'll get away with it. and I hope Hermione at least gets a few good licks in before he does worse to her. More more more please. Update soon again please. I am dying to see how this story turns out. it's a fave of mine.
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter!! I am very very anxious to see what happens next. I hope you update very quickly! :)
person firewall
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Severus had better get his ass down there quickly. That or she needs to use that stiletto on another part of Lucius' body. Hmmmmmm.
person Alyson
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty please update!
person Crazy4Malfoy
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this story! Can't wait for more! If you'd like, could you email me and tell me when you've updated? Email is: b_crazy_101@hotmail.com.


Thanks for such a great story. This is the best SS/HG story I have ever read!
person Queeny
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww Severus is rather sweet in this story.
Keep in mind this is my from posting chapter 13 of The Morning After, where my Severus has gotten quite nasty.

So this Severus is all .. Lovely. :)
person takemeaway
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! I loved it. Severus is so sexy in this one.
person Bella Snape
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be more? I think there should be!!!

I loved this story, and would love to read more of it.
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person lisa
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww he told her he'd miss her. that was so sweet and such a surprise coming from the surly Potions Master. He is so delicious though. Poor Hermione I eeel so bad for her but she has great potential right in frnt of her. She has a chance to show a child that someone cares and loves her and that it is ok to be who she is and to not let things people say change her. She has so much right in front of her and I hope she realizes it. It's just a big mess. Awesome chappie. Love the story. More more more please. and Update soon please.