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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person Queen Celestia
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOWWWWW.

Please please tell me that Malfoy gets brutally murdered!
person pickles87
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my what a brut.
hopefully sev will save her soon and do away with luc.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha,ha! What timing the child has!
person angel
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .... i hope they can find a why to get her out of going to azkaban .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter once again! :)
person Empress
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed yet, not because I don't love it but because I like to do one big wrap up. I'll however break my silence to let you know that you've got a truly original story on your hands and you are doing such a good job with it too. You've got the structure that, with more editing, can be one of the best in the genre. Good work and I look forward to the rest of the story.
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOORAY FOR NARCISSA! She can't go to Azkaban! She can't!
person Bella Snape
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better. I though Lucius would not take it lying down. Severus is going to get really cross now!!! Woe betide anyone who hurts his Hermione.
person angel
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man he has lost it.. i hope she does go to albus .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! Poor Mione!!! Sev to the rescue!!! (I hope)