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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person lisa
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!! That was so sweet. That lil girl is something. She makes you wanna wrap her up and take her home with you. She so sweet . and Lol Severus really loves her, how long can he deny it? More please more more more. I have been waiting fr an update. and it was a wonderful chappie. Please Update soon.
person firewall
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Ron was really concerned. I wonder if he'll react negatively since she didn't come home. I must say, I really am enjoying this story.
person Lydia
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great. Severus is in Love. i just hope Hermione will figure it out soon. thanks and i hope you post again soon.
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How sweet. :)
Is Ron going to wig out and take Severus' house by storm? :)
person britt
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Liz
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... Corrin is such a sweetie. No Amy in sight... and Corrin doesn't seem to miss her too much.
person Crazy4Malfoy
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again you have outdone yourself! Please, please, please update! Though I know you probably have a life that doesn't count you sitting at the computer 24/7. But I absolutely love your story and I like how the relationship between Severus and Hermione is drawn out as neither one of them would just automatically fall in love with the other one, now would they? I check back every day, sometimes multiple times a day, for an update so I hope you update soon! You are one of my favorite authors!
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh get them to admit that they love each other please? I love all the UST in this story though.
person takemeaway
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww man, what a time for corrin to come into the room. and damn, narcissa sure gave lucius what he deserved!
person lisa
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh thank god Severus was there to savce Hermione. Lucius is totally insane. and Narcissa should be given a medal for all she went through and for doing him in. Poor Narcissa. and I think Severus is falling in love. Awww thats's so sweet. and lol go figure leave it to a kid to ruin a special moment. but they dont know they do so it's not their fault. I love how Corrin says her hugs are the best and always make her feel better. Sweet and innocently true. She seems to have the mothers touch even if Corrin isnt her own. Good chappie. Love it. More more more please Update soon please.