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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person Citten
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay too much to say in one review, but in short I LOVE THIS STROY! i do hope that this story is a lot, a lot, a lot longer! and i do hope that some way either with great care or with severus' help that they could have a baby together. just keep those updates coming my dear.
person angel
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ ohh i would love to read the reast of that anwser....please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Oh!" Ginny cooed suddenly, "Aren't you just adorable! No wonder Hermione likes working with you!"

Corrin wandered slowly down the stairs giving Ginny a mistrustful look, "Where's Hermione? I heard her this morning... Who's that, daddy?"

"That," He answered smugly, looking at a glaring Ginny, "would be a Weasley."

Corrin frowned with childish innocence, "What's a Weasley?"


What's a Weasley? Love it! I can't wait for Severus just to tell Hermione that he loves her!
person mina
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally an " I love you "; now, the other needs to say it back...
Great fic BTW
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAY Severus is telling Hermione how he feels! :}
person angel
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh the three little word were said ..imhappy ther were .. please please please please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I've seen a Weasley! I've seen a Weasley!" LMAO! I LOVED that! :) Excellent chapter. (as always!)
person firewall
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROTFL "What's a Weasley?" Priceless. The repartee between Severus and Hermione in bed was terrific. Very nicely orchestrated.
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
person takemeaway
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww. i loved that. he is still trying to deny that he is falling for her, and she is afraid to get too close to him. very well done