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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person lisa
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the sweetest chappie yet. They seem so close to happiness. and Severus has let her know he loves her and wants her. and she has a lil girl there that really needs her and wants her. It would be perfect if Severus somehow found a way to heal Hermione or perhaps a way to carry a baby to term. I know Severus said he didn't want another child but I cant help but think he would if he knew Hermione wanted ot so badly. I cant wait to see what happens. More more more please. Update soon.please.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww. though how sad that he never told his daughter he loved her.
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! (as always!) hehe, I wonder what will happen in the next chapter... hehe, i cannot wait!
person Kris
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwe, of course Corrin is smart! =D
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person angel
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww that was soo sweet .. please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Shdwcat27
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter. Thanks for the update.
person Citten
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
isn't true that kids can do that so easily to us and do exactly what you said about the truth. boy i really wish that you can work something out so that hermione can get and stay pregent and that this story is a LOT longer because i enjoy it way too much! :)
person Ava Allen
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaa... new chapter :-)
I think, that there will be more children, right ??? ;-)
person Amethystique
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOH you Evil,Evil,Evil author! How naughty to leave us dangling with such a tantalising cliffhanger. I absolutely LOVE this fic. Great plot line, fantastic dialogue, wonderful multi-dimensional characters. This work has got everything. All I need now is....MORE, MORE, MORE and be quick about it please. *flutters eyelashes in a pathetic attempt at looking sweet and innocent* HA I've failed miserably!
Blessings and Lemon sherbets for your muse
Amethystique ; )X