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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person firewall
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 25 Now that was just plain eerie! Ron's flowers, Hermione's dream. Not nice.
person Ava Allen
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this chapter !!! I love Corrin...she is adorable and sweet. And she make very good job for Hermione and Severus :-)))
person pickles87
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
allright what did ron do to her??? i know the next chapter or two right.. hurry up..
person msvanessa
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, what did Ron do!

p.s.
I love your story. And I love that you're a much better fic updater than I am.
person Lydia
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well that was interesting. i think Ron did something to the flowers. that was good. please post again soon.
person Kris
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwweeeeee -.- Cant wait for more chapters!
person sheedy
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm what is Ron up to now? What did he lace the flowers with? And who is the mysterious nightly visitor that actually get into Snapes house? He is so paranoid I'll bet it's warded six ways to Sunday.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I practically had a heart attack over that paint fight until I remembered that they're wizards and can actually clean up such a thing. Oh, I wish I could do that, there is now a part of my living room carpet that is decidedly blue and under a throw rug from someone knocking over the bucket. But, another great chapter, so yay!
person lisa
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was so nice and cute. Hermione and Corrin playing in the paint. loads of fun. And lol Severus snarking a t Albus was funny and then going home and ambushing Hermione and Hermione got him backm lol. And thanks for t ouching upon the subject of Severus helping her, I always wondered why he couldnt help her, now I know. Awesome as usual. more more more please. Please update soon. I am glad to see Corrin laugh and smile as a child should. good job.
person takemeaway
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww! great chappie! I loved that playfulness, it was very cute, very realistic