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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DANG! The plot thickens.... ;)
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this so far :D Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh my god, Poor Hermione. and Severus the dunder head didnt help matters any. too late he realzied his mistake, but thank goodness He went after her. Poor thing is in such a state. and the dream. I wonder who it is? wow cant wait to find out. More more more. Please update soon.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN THAT WAS AN EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!! please please update soon! I just have to know what happens!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG !!!!!!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is getting interesting. what did Ron do? did Voctor put him up to it? please post soon.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You wrote in Ch 1 - "I have to make up for your lack of personality, you know! I have to put up with the fact that you're a social piranha!"
The word/term that you should use is 'PIRIAH - One that is despised or rejected: outcast'. Not a piranha... though in Severus' case a fish that will attack and bite viciously, might work after all.
The word/term that you should use is 'PIRIAH - One that is despised or rejected: outcast'. Not a piranha... though in Severus' case a fish that will attack and bite viciously, might work after all.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really suspenseful. Well done.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_________________O MYSTERY MISCARRIAGE?!?
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ouch. boy poor poor hermione, that girl has more trouble than she could care to admite. well what will happen now and what was the dream and who was it and what will happen now? please update soon!