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for Maternal Instinct

by MissSnape

person hermioneSNAPEfan1983
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
poor hermione, maybe hermione is one of those people who can get pregnant but cant STAY pregnant to full tearm and have the baby?? maybe there is a potion to FIX that problem??? hope so there is a potion to do just that!!! this time had it been the pain potion she took that caused the loss of the baby?? She stopped, sucking in a breath through clenched teeth and pressing her hand to her stomach. "I'm sorry... I
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much that I read it all in one sitting; good job!
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person kirabates
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story!!! I absolutely loved it!!! Brilliant!! Thanks for writing it!
person Morticia Heartless
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if the Red liquid on the flor os blood then you need to know that blood expeled from the stomach or bowls is black, tar black.
person Wicked Witch
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful!!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!!!
person WickedWitch
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that I haven't left a review before the last chapter...I'm such a slacker! Like many of your readers, I absolutely adored Corrin asking "What's a Weasley?"...That was perfect. And in the last chapter I loved Draco scowling when asked if Harry was there..."Unfortunately."... LMAO! The story was well written overall. Actually quite canon in character. I hated Amy. For an Original Character, she was very well written! I do wonder what happened to Ron though. I may have overread that part. Excellent work!
person *DB*
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Loved the ending. This was an amazing story I loved reading it!!! Maybe a sequel??? I hope!!!
person Rose Evans
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just had to let you know how much I LOVED this story. I did'nt want it to end, it was so good. Thank you so much for writting it.
person Annamarie
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! You did the characters so well, and brought the emotions to life in a beautiful way. I do hope you decide to write a sequel ;)