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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"...Looking at the grandfather cock in the darkened hallway..."
At grandfather *what*?!! :)
At grandfather *what*?!! :)
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! was that your first lemon? it was good for a first. ^_^
they're still SOOOOO waff-ish! *shakes head in endearment*
so Lucious is having problems.....hmmmm
they're still SOOOOO waff-ish! *shakes head in endearment*
so Lucious is having problems.....hmmmm
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok again this was good, however I was a little dissapointed with the lack of foreplay in the sex scene. I think maybe there should have been a little more exploration before they went stright into the major act. Also not to be critical but I know for a fact that there is no way that anal sex can be accomplished withut lubrication. Harry would be unable to get it in without it. And even if he did it would tear Draco apart. However the sex scene was poignat and filled with love which was very sweet and made for good reading. Once again a great chapter.
*Crimson Regret
*Crimson Regret
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was such a mixture of emotions...so sad and so happy and just wow! I realised I havent read this chapter either so I decided to review! This is such a great story. I really loved it how Ginny told him to just stop and just love. :D it was so sweet! Go Ginny! Who's trying to kill Draco? They better stay away! Lol. :D
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so great! It was a really hot make out session, except Draco stopped it...grr, dumb Draco. Oh well, off to read the next chapter!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so beautiful! It was a little unrealistic, especially since they didnt use lube or anything like that but it was still just so romantic and beautiful! I dont know how else to explain it! Though, for advice, you should read some yaoi fan fics to get some idea, I did it for my lemons, lol (I sucked in the beginning, your way better then me). I'd recommend Protecting the Lion but its a lot more involved though, it has 50 chapters but its complete. Its a Seifer/Squall fan fic (from Final Fantasy VIII) but just look up your favourite stuff and click on yaoi (guranteed everything would have it) and read some. But yours was great! I loved it! It was so romantic and PERFECT! So...when are Ron and Hermoine gonna figure those two out? With emotions like theirs i doubt they'll be able to keep it a secret much longer! Update soon!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooooooooooooo sappy. gah! >.<
& yet i can't stop myself from coming back..... i must be masochistic. ~.~
^_^ keep it coming.
& yet i can't stop myself from coming back..... i must be masochistic. ~.~
^_^ keep it coming.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just loved it!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey there, I have abaolutely no idea why you havent got more reveiws!!! this is a fucking excellent fic!!! Amazing!!! I love the whole idea of Malfoy getting Ginny's heart and so not only being to some extent Harry's old love, but also his new love. WOW, please, please, please continue, cause I tell you what you have one avid fan here!!!
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww, so much & yet so little!!!
now we just have to deal with the deadly-daddy issues! ^_^
where have the professors been during all this i wonder?
now we just have to deal with the deadly-daddy issues! ^_^
where have the professors been during all this i wonder?