rate_review Reviews

I loved this. It went a bit too fast in the beginning, and a few things seemed horribly out of character for them, even when they were falling in love, but over all this was an amazing story, and I absolutely adored it!

I would not have been able to deal with my consience nagging me for not reviewing such a good, well-written story. It was very unique and touching. I commend you sincerely for creating this fic. But I must say that one thing bothered me: if it was Ginny's heart that Draco received then it was (according to your story) HER feelings for Harry that he experienced. Not his own. He wouldn't have felt the same way under other circumstances. That just bothered me a lot. It wasn't really Draco's love for Harry. That makes it seem like a love built on false pretenses. that was the only thing that bothered me.

I would not have been able to deal with my consience nagging me for not reviewing such a good, well-written story. It was very unique and touching. I commend you sincerely for creating this fic. But I must say that one thing bothered me: If it was Ginny's heart that Draco received then it was (according to your story) HER feelings for Harry that he experienced. Not his own. He wouldn't have felt the same way under other circumstances. That just bothered me a lot. It wasn't really Draco's love for Harry. That makes it seem like a love built on false pretenses. That was the only thing that bothered me.

Ok, I am on the next to last chapter and I had to STOP reading to say a few things. I DO like this story, but WHERE were Dumbledore & Snape in all this? Also, there most DEFINITELY IS a counter-curse for Imperious. Why didn't Harry report what was going on?

OK, barring all other arguments, there is still NO WAY the teachers would stand around on the Quidditch pitch and allow Lucius to threaten Harry. What would have happened if Draco didn't come out of Imperious? You would have a very dead Harry and a bunch of stupid looking professors just watching it happen. Minerva would NEVER have the others just back off. Snape's personality alone would have had him running out to Draco at least. A good story, but face it, you simply picked the wrong location for their "Show-Down". There are too many wide open holes here to make it believable.

thank-u for the answers. ^_^
good points all.

WOWOOWOWOWOWOWO! THAT WAS SO GOOD! i dont know why you needed to explain all those things...they seemed pretty straight forward to me but oh well, each to their own. i dont think you could do a sequel to this anyway, it would ruin the whole thing. especially since the epilogue is ten years later. this story rocks and i think your a great writer! email me if you write anything new! I pretty much read anything! :D great job! it was so wonderful!!!!!!!!!!! words just cant describe, lol. :D you should feel proud! :D

ok. i love sap, to a point anyway. but this story reeeeaaaally pushes it. ^_~

got a few questions though:
1) How is Harry THAT stupid about the imperious curse!? & don't the eyes glaze over when one is under the imperious curse -i thought that was one of the tell-tale signs...

2) How did Lucious get onto school grounds in the first place? -what with all the wards & all...

3) Why didn't Draco inherit Malfoy Manor? Lucious was in Azkaban; wouldn't that mean all his property-holding rights were invalid and everything would pass to someone else? -so after Narcissa was killed, why didn't Draco inherit everything?
along the same line, Lucious couldn't LEGALLY disinherit Draco (change the will etc.), could he? he was a fugitive after all...

just wondering if u have any answers for these things as the author. ^_^


ps: i like the switch off of house colors in the RmofRqrmnt. ^_~

aww...the story is so sweet. However, I do wonder where are the teachers when Lucius appeared on the Quidditch pitch? Surely, an adult could have interfere? It's really dramatic, however, the fighting scene, and how Harry shouted out his love for Draco....so romantic! But I keep wondering...where are the adults? Why can't they do anything? Also, when Draco was first hit with the AK curse, why doesn't he go to either Snape or the Headmaster? Why doesn't Harry when he learned that Draco's life is in danger, and the one who wants to kill Draco is in the castle? Perhaps you would want to give a reason that alienates Draco even more, and if he has no faith in any of the teachers, then it would make sense that Draco wont want to alert the authority, and if he convinces Harry to not report the incident.

I like this story a lot. It's so sweet and romantic. I enjoyed it immensely and am very anxious for the sequel. Thanks for writing.

Esrinthly.

P.S. V.V. hot sex scene. I have always had trouble writing sex scenes...and therefore I'm very appreciative of good sex scenes. Good job!

Well done! I thought it was an excellent story.