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by devilfancy

schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not that I dont like corpses, but ok. *g*
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tht
person ItsaMiracle
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...hahahahaha WHAT? I mean huh? what happen there at the end..lol totally didnt'see that coming...hahah oh shit that was a real prick of malfoy to do.
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha.....damn..lol Gee Malfoy could be a dumb ass. lol man I like this fic, its really intersting!


...lol I still can't get over how the first chapter ended..lol that was a good one
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uh oh now Harry has gon all nutters...this is reall an interesting read..really!
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Stunned look on face...)

Draco PAYED Harry for that?!!!!!

As in: fuck-toy payed?!!!

OH!!!!!

That---

(Speechless...)

Hmph...

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person devilfancy
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry was a virgin and in love with Draco.
Draco was a asshole who tricked him into believing he loved him back
and then did the most insulting thing he possibly could to hurt him.
person welcome_earthling
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my heart broke for Harry when I read that last line!

Very effective build up then with the last few words you pull it all down
person jesse
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What?!- I don't get it... Is harry a whore... cause if that's the case then you ruined it with the sappy love stuff.... and if it's anything else then you didn't explain it enough.... *scratches head*