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by devilfancy

person thrnbrooke
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm still stunned. Loved it!
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Harry used crucio?! I'm floored. Stunned.
person Anon
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooOoooOooooo

i loved that
person ItsaMiracle
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahah...*sighs* Your sick lol, this is really a twisted, fucked up story..but I it was also an interesting read. Man...Hrry and Draco are going to have an interseted relationship
person roxierose13
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg.... that was.... short. and wow. and i cant think of anything to say. How could Harry use an Unforgiveable? I know Draco did a horrible thing... but that's just Draco. Besides, Harry already knew, so i don't understand. I... find this very sad and Harry very odd. Not too fluffy. the first chapter was but that was it. Hmm... i dont know *shrugs*
person devilfancy
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate it when Harry goes to pieces like a big sniveling piece of nothing just because he got screwed. I think its much more likely he would fight back. =p
Draco did an unforgivable.
Harry just used one in return.
Its the only way they could ever be even and start over.
person vittani
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very dark at the end. And totally surprising (money and crucio). wow.
person Charon
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! love it!!
the first chapter was heart-breaking, i was like"die draco! DIE!! DIE!!!!!!"

now should i be happy that he went back to harry? hmmm...no, still think he's a friggin git!!

but i got to say, i love the third chapter-it was totally cool, i was like "yay cool harry!!"....or was it psychotic?

please update soon-anxoius to read more
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, you have me holding me breath until you update. So if you don't want a corpse on your hands you should really hurry. I just really loved the way you wrote this, especially the second chapter. Really good stuff.