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by devilfancy

person SP777
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I gotta admit he DID have that one coming.
person Fate-Angel
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WTF!?
VERY surprising ending, good, but still unexpected
The crucio might have been a bit much...

Nice work
=^-^=
person Dezra
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, when I first read the first chapter, it seriously disturbed me. But now, I'm applauding Harry. I wish there was more. I love to see a commanding!Harry and hopefully a VERY sorry!Draco.
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!!!
person DrarryKiss
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I'm glad Draco saw his mistake. I'm glad Harry taught him a lesson. Is Harry in charge of their relationship? Sounds like it. I love a DomHarry.
person hpfan
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh thats funny but you should more details on torturing draco because he deserves to be tortured. it didnt quite end right. you should keep going!! ,.......and torture draco....lol
person stasa
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just can
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Creepy...but good. Very good. And creepy. At least Draco doesn't die or anything. He's just lead around on a leash like he deserves! Bwuhahahaha! XD
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy sodding sideways FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sweet Jesus fucking Christ. That was the LAST thing I was expecting!!!!!!

Oh my God.

That was truly brilliant.

Hats off to ya!!!

XD
person too lazy to log in
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! next chapter please!!