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for Sacrifice

by snowsong1004

person Anon
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story lot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You make me happy. :)
person Ladyaph
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a story I first came across in fanfiction.net I have been dying to see what new things have happened since. I hope you find time to update soon. I do not think that it is OCC for either Snape or Hermione, I find it quite belivable it is a phenominal tale. Well done
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC. The best thing by far I have ever read here. Please, please, please continue.
person crinna
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thoroughly enjoyable... please don't have us wait another 16 months for the next one. hear are some questions to get the ball rolling.

did snape regret not having a better view when she was getting out of the tub? how soon dose she have to be prego? did they get any interesting wedding gifts form friends or enemies? what kind work will Hermione do now that she is done with her studies? will she be able to work? how do her friends react? how about his "friends"?

you can take these questions or toss them out. no need to answer them directly. they are entirely self serving. meant only to feed your plot bunny so I can read more of the delightful fic.
person crinna
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry if my review sounded Snarky. i tend to sound bitchy when i wright. i love your story.
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I missed this when it was first published, but I'm glad you posted another chapter so it rolled up to the top of the list again. Love any kind of 'Marriage Law' stories ... especially ones that are so well done as this one is. PLEASE KEEP POSTING!!!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad you snagged that plot bunny out in the yard, and saved it from the dogs! Are you certain this isn't the same bunny as before? The second chapter flows seamlessly from the first. Good job!
person ozarkmoon
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The internal dialog that Severus had was very interesting. Is this a one shot, or will there be more?