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There's always OOCness in love stories concerning Severus, at least mine...but it is always towards Hermione and not others. He is just as snarky as ever with everyone else, and he still retains a bit of snarkiness toward Hermione, though he tempers it. Hermione wanting a family seemed reasonable to me, she's not a student at Hogwarts anymore...but a grown woman. Severus needed to talk to Hermione. They were sleeping together and she loved him and knew nothing about him other than he was a potions professor and former spy. It was also a concrete way to show the changes in the wizard, how he was growing closer to the witch, trusting her. Sorry it threw you but going from galleon-driven bastard to wizard-in-love requires some snark reduction and emotional growth. An (almost) emotionally mature Severus always seems OOC Thanks for reading though.

not all grown-up women crave to be wives and mothers at the age of twenty-something, especially if they're academically brilliant as hermione is supposed to be. being a 40 year old scientist myself, half the women i know didn't become involved in family business until way over 30, and the other half didn't want to be mothers at all. but as i said, don't let it concern you, probably it's just me - it just doesn't agree with my personal idea of hermione.

So very creative. Excellent story.

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Not really the way I was picturing them getting married.
Finding out that they were meant to be together and a few obstacles and a few months passing by with them making the world know that they Loved each other and that they intend to get marry was more like I was thinking but this is a new twist to any other story I've read.
Can't wait to see how this turns out.
please update soon

OMG I love this fic sooooo much!i also read your what was i thinking fics and thought they were amazing but didnt realise it was you who had also written them!So all in all I am completely addicted to your fics!
How freaky were those demons,jacking off right over them lol!And now they have to get married,there seems to be a lot to this ritual that Snape wasnt letting Hermione in on lol.Wouldnt it just be so funny if it turned out there was one more thing he didnt quite tell her,a baby prhaps lol

~lol~ man sev .. well now they now he love her and they will marry in 48 hour.. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

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Lyta: I can see your point. Out of the 41 HP based stories I've written, this is the first one where Hermione actively wants a family. In the others, she is more as you envision her.

What a lovely twisted imagination you have!! Bravo!

He loves her, YYYEEESSS!!!
... and he has to marry her ... excellent!

AWWWWWWWWWW!!!! He does love her and he tortured hisself to prove it. that was sooo sweet and romatic and lol foolish Severus could have been killed. Hermione's a lucky girl. and yay now he has to marry her lol and he said he wasn't the marrying type well I guess now he has no choice. and all thanks to his own doing. I love it. trapped. but I think he likes it. The choice is made and he doesn't really have to edge around it anymore. Awesome chappie. loved the lemon. Update soon please. I cannot wait to see what Hermione's reaction is.