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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed Ero's directing of the sunlight!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ho crap! What the hell happened to Bara?!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg what the heck was that? I didn't really think Bara would do it. Voldermort's cousin? *still shaking head* jusst I cannot believe it. lol good chappie. AS I said before awesome story. you are very talented and hope I see more of your stories. Goodluck and again Awesome my favorite story with my Favorite Severus.
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a great story. Will you be starting another story soon?
I'm disappointed about Bara though. Too bad he fell to the dark side.
I'm disappointed about Bara though. Too bad he fell to the dark side.
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. so in the end bara became the new dark lord .... that was great i love it .. i cant wait in till your next story... in till then later for now
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* no more cute, innocent, bara.
loved the story though. the cliff hanger worked out nicely in the end, though i sure didnt enjoy it when reading. but yep...shall see you next story!
if you ever get bored, you should so add an epilouge part 2 about when severus and hermione do have kids and what its like when they go to school and such... heck, maybe even a story...like when bara is leading all the untouchables...or maybe not. it might be too parallel to the real hp. ah well. i'm sure you're next story will be great (just like all your others) and i'm looking forward to reading!
loved the story though. the cliff hanger worked out nicely in the end, though i sure didnt enjoy it when reading. but yep...shall see you next story!
if you ever get bored, you should so add an epilouge part 2 about when severus and hermione do have kids and what its like when they go to school and such... heck, maybe even a story...like when bara is leading all the untouchables...or maybe not. it might be too parallel to the real hp. ah well. i'm sure you're next story will be great (just like all your others) and i'm looking forward to reading!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG ARE YOU FOR REAL??? I had such high hopes for that boy......please please please tell me there will be a sequel
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All good things must come to an end. DAMNIT! -.- Loved it. Absolutely Loooooooovvveeed it! One of my favorite reads of ze Fanfiction world in many many years! =P
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UGH totally wanted so smack Severus upside his head for being so stupid! D<
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i have to say that i really loved your story up to chp 59 or so - but the last couple of chapters, i don't know. to me now both of them seem to be way OOC, hermione craving and demanding to be a wife and mother, and severus getting teary-eyed and telling her his life story? and that ritual in the last two chps .... but then again, as i said i really loved the story for the most part, so keep up the good work. possibly it's just me ...