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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of course you are going to continue this story and will be at least 40 chapters long of wonderful plot, chracterizations, filled with just the right amount of angst,action,a hint of humor, and a few lemons. YOu goth all that! Now get to it.Your loyal readers are impatinetly tapping their feet ( ok just the refresh button hoping to see more chapters appear.)Terrific start. Loved your ideas about the beginning of the Dementors. How original. Please do continue this story.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I kept coming back and there is was- a new chapter. Not that you did it for me personally, but still, thank you. I am confused. Is this Andreas Mbutu supposed to be the same character in the Daddy Dearest story or are you just re-using a name that you liked?
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
JB: I often reuse my original characters in alternate universe stories just as I put Severus and Hermione in different situations with different histories. They retain their core charateristics but there are other changes in their circumstances. For example, Marcus is always a womanizer and troublemaker, Adam is always flamboyant and with Victor and Andreas is always wise and resourceful.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How do you come up with so many amazing story lines? Its so nice to read something that hasn't been done to death and you always write beautifully.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please do pursue this story; I am curious to know what happens!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know this is SS/HG, which is wonderful, but you did a great Draco. I think its great you keep thinking up new ways in which to intangle these guys.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahhaha I would like to see where this is gonna go!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start!!! I can't wait to see your dark Sev.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting start!!! i hope you will continue!