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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person lisa
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack!! omg I cannot believe it. Uggg Hermione and her indecision and now it has cost her Severus. I just can't believe it uggg!! She had him for an hour but still Severus jumped the gun and left without having anything clarified. He gave up at the first sign of trouble. Which makes me wonder he most obviously loved her but maybe he's just incapabe of it being the all encompassing love that most true couples share.. Poor Severus damned for eternity just to prove his love and now he cannot even feel what he fought to prove. SAD VERY SAD. Please update soon. It's another cliffie and I cannot wait for an update. Awesome chappie even though I am upset at Hermione. more more more please.
person vampyrgoth
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another Brilliant story from Ms_Figg :) Great plot, and loved the way Snape slowly transformed into a guy that cud love :) Cant wait for the epilogue.
person angel
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww that was great... yeah love own in the end .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

angel
person Chavela
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 65!

Wow, how painful this is. Poor Severus and Hermione. And Hermione is stupid, always messing up everything. UGH!

Great chapter!
person Chavela
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 66!

OMG! HOw wonderful! They are back together. YAY! I am so happy, I was pretty nervous there for a minute! But now it is alright.
person lisa
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. thank the gods that Eros intervened and Hermione was able to take Severus soul back to him. and I am so happy they finally got married and lol only to be Hermione. I wouldn't mind at all. Severus is so delicious. very awesome chappies , very awesome story. My very favorite. You are so talented and hope you continue to write. I do so love to read. Thanks again so much for the wonderful story and I cannot wait for the epilouge to see if they have kids lol and what kind of father Severus turns out to be.
person angel
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww that was awesome i love it please please please please please please please please please update soon ... later for now

angel
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for Eros! And snap! xD
person eliza
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
realy enjoyed the whole story... funny ending too... just a bit predictable about bara....
read you next story:P
person firewall
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant ending, Ms Figg, a new Dark Lord. Looking forward to a new story and thank you for sharing this one with us.