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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person angel
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. i hope she can find a why to save harry.. i hope snape will help her .... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person firewall
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4 - You may be on to something with the violin. Snape kinda reminds me of Sherlock Holmes in looks and his antisocial behaviour. Waiting eagerly for another chapter.
person Kris
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, Cant wait to see this meeting. Hahahaha
person Cara
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've read alot of your H/S stories [my favourite] and they've all been erotically awesome. But Snape seems to be at his meanest in this one. Lol poor Hermione. It'll be interesting to see how they warm up, if they do.
Please continue with this story. I think it has a great plot with potential. =)
-Cara [a fan]
person luce
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. What a way to live. LOL at Severus being a violinist. But yeah, why not? Nice surprise, maybe one day he'll play on... ooops, play *for*, Hermione ;-)
person DragonKisser
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be good . . . I can taste it. Mean and unforgiving . . . just how I like my potions masters. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter.
person firewall
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 & 2 - You've made Draco quite the man...a little naughty and a little nice. Very attractive.
person jamie
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow I really like this severus!
person firewall
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - Yes, you've definitely made Draco very appealing. Snape is a hoot as usual. Her patron? What's a little sex afterall? LOL This should be an interesting meeting. I can't wait.
person luce
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm interested to see how Draco develops along with the rest of the story. Don't make him too wussy now, please? He has to be strong to take on our Severus. Ooooh, now I'm telling you how to write. I'll just shut up now and leave you too it, shall I? 'Coz you do it best.