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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person luce
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Hermione is lucky he didn't hex her into the next world for speaking to him so.... truthfully. And he laid it on the line for her. She hates house elf servitude, but she is entering into a kind of servitude for Harry's sake. Sad she has to give up her independance though. This was a great chapter.
person angel
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. snape is getting what he wnat her out of the private sector... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person catseye
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! this story has me hooked...like allmost all your other stories. I wonder if Miss Granger
is innocent or if she has lost her virginal status somewhere along the past few years.
I guess it will have been problematic for her to keep a healthy relationship with somebody, when there is always Harrys wellbeing to be thought of by her. You know, your website is the first to be opened by me, when I go online. God I'm like a junky...hooked on your stories. ;)
person nessie
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is moving. Snape is realy cool. This promises to be a great story.
person angel
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ poor mione .. hmm what is she going to do to get back at him .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person DJ
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want a patron. If it's Snape, or Draco, or Lucius. I just love those Slytherin men. Delish!!
Great chapters - can't wait to see how Hermione passes his tests. We know she will.
person firewall
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, she never should have trusted Snape and it's good to know that she hasn't lost her bargaining talents...although, she might have been a bit more specific re the sex. Oh well, her loss, our gain. LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.
person luce
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tough negotiations there. Well written. Neither budged much, but both got what they wanted, or needed. Even if they don't know it yet! Love the blue hex! Very funny. Raucous is avenged. Can't wait to see how Hermione tries to get back at Severus for it.
person luce
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done Draco! What a cranky old ferta Severus is. But that's why we love him. Can't wait for the meeting...
person annie
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! this is a great story!! i do hope you will continue to write this!! i loooove long stories and as you said it looks to be one!! although if it puts a tax on your time then it is quite understandable but i do hope you change your mind and write a great long piece! you're the best author here!! i love your stories!! please continue writing this one!!!