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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Clitoral piercing??? "They all want me" ??? EWWW. >.< NO THANKS.

Yeah but the dildo sounds interesting, and a nice run in with Ginny. :)
person Magali
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first chapter and liked it very much, it seems you're up to yet another fantastic fic... I like the way you describe things. Good job
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah Snape you sneaky blighter!! xDD Sending Hermione off the trial of revenge by giving her a book.
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weird kids are the most interesting kind. :)
And all that stuff about music of the universe full of Harpers got me all "WHAAAT? What is this useless drivvle?!" But then I had to think logically and be all "Severus doesn't keep useless drivvle in his library."

Poor Hermione, she's got Severus more interested in sex now. It would be somewhat amusing if Severus started to think about sex more often due to his interactions with Hermione. xDD or become a sex maniac. No wait. We need Hermione to finish her research. :)
person MysticF
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must admit you are my favourite author on this site. Your fics have a way of dragging me into them, you have original ideas and I love the lemons, though I wish you didn't use anal sex so much... it's just not the same as in a slash fic, girls get nothing out of it... anywaaay, passing the thought of Hermione running for the bathroom... Very cold Severus there, I don't think she should forgive him unless something drastic changes... The man is such a mystery that anything is possible, but I'd like to think he has "some" redeeming qualities! Of course he does! I like the idea of Harry as a vegetable, for some reason that seems a good enough sacrifice without his actually dying. Liked the history of dementors a lot, and I'm guessing we haven't seen the last of them. I will come back for the next updates!
person luce
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, he was actually kind! A little baby lemon to whet our appetites, eh? Let Hermione's learning begin! On to the next chapter...
person luce
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For a 'made up theory', it sounds quite plausible. And lovely in a way. We all move to the music of the universe. Yeah, maybe Hermione should have been a bit more precise when it came to the exact wording of the sex bit of the patronage agreement; but then we wouldn't have much of a story to read, would we? We like lemons, and they *can* be bitter, so........ *shrugs* You're building up good, multi-layered characters so far... I reckon anyway. Severus especially. I like your onion analogy, it fits. Like an onion, that devil can make your eyes water! LOL.
person Purple Velvet
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say Ms_Figg that I've been enjoying some of your fics for the past couple of days and might even add that they are some of the best written fic I have found in some time. I would like to thank you for all the hard work put into writing and posting these little babies (Hope you don't mind me calling them babies.) I enjoy the Snape that you have postrait in your fics and most of all I enjoy the slytherin aspect that you bring to Hermione.

I would like to plea to you to continue this fic because you have brought it to my attention and I most say that I am interested to see how it will go. Only time will tell if Snape will become very much the lover he was in "You Promised It Would Be Forever" (which I might add that the title give me an emotional ball in my throat even before I read it) or if he will be a bastard like in "Inside The Blackest Heart". Although I like very much the 'sappy hapyy ending' Snape, the bastard is still very interesting to read about.

So again, thank you for your ideas, wonderful fics, and devoted time. It's really really worth while!

hugs and kisses
PV
person luce
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Geez, I didn't think Fabio's head was worth that! LOL. Nasty brute he is. That's why we lurve him. Love the cute little house; with the violin, it's a nice counterpoint to Severus and his bleakness.
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Felt like actually reading this story. *was being lazy* Sounds good so far! :) Scary dementor history! =O