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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Cara
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg you can't give us that hot chapter and leave us hanging by a thread!!
damn damn. :/
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mooooooooore
person Kris
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my, what a cliffe. XD
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My nose thanks you? xDDD

person Cara
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Surely you don't have more important things to do than write this story? =p
Oh I really like it so far.
Snape must have been irked or something when she said she was just a toy for him. What a silly man.
More chapters, please!
person angel
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great .. man one would think she did that just to go again .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would lvoe to read more ... later for now

angel
person chikyuu
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story but there was no warning that it contains anal sex. Shite, I avoid anal.
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sorry hon. I couldn't fit every bit of the description into the details. :(
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh cant wait for more!
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione becoming sexually frustrated. :(