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As bad as Simon? He's worse.
He can actually hex you.

'Pussy-whipped' HAHAAHA. omg that was hilarious.
I liked the part with Albus yelling at the ministry. So sad about Minerva...'the only woman he had ever loved intimately..' that really intrigued me. No one really knows anything about Dumbledore's past...it would be interesting to hear something from his POV. though, without sex of course. :(
Two chapters in one day...that was a real treat. Thank you thank you.
But damn now I have to download hedwig's song to see what all the fuss is about.

Cara: Actually I took a midi file of "Hedwig's Song" and rendered its parts to all violin, then rendered it again to an mp3 file. I plan to put a link to the violin version when I come to that part on my own website, but I will include the link to the streaming file when I post the chapter that corresponds with it on AFF. :)

Cara: Actually, in the story "The Makeover" Minerva is taken to task for being so strait-laced by Rolanda Hooch, something about her and Albus breaking a swivel chair in the Transfiguration classroom when he was a teacher and she was a seventh year No details but that can give you an idea how they were. :) I've been thinking about writing a story about them in their younger years...back when they were sexy. lol. Maybe I will.

This story is 'bloody brilliant' if i do say so myself .
:) You're an awesome writer keep up the good work...

~lol~ i love how she got in to say yes.... and i hope they find out about minerva are able to help her out to .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

aww I hope you feel better soon. and lol it was really good. I loved the lemons. and they do seem quite smitten lol. I cannot wait til you update again. but I understand. hope you get well soon. update when you can please. Keep up the good work.

Wow...it's always to the point of exhaustion with snape huh? She even fell asleep lol.
Great chapter, awesome...'action'.
I hope a relationship of some sort will form maybe later on, because even though your action scenes are flaming hot, emotion from both of them would add a lot to the story. Seems like you're already starting the passion going...snape thinking hermione is beautiful? Really tender. Erm, not his ministrations of course. Just a sweet moment in the middle of rough sex.
Hope you feel better!
-Cara

I find it interesting that after a few reviews that don't go along with the "OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY *SQUEE*" view that most of your readers have, that you feel it necessary to say that we can "say whatever" we want, but you'll keep writing. Well, of course you will - it IS your story, after all. And your saying that it is "The first and last time" you'll address the issue of the rape is fine too - again, your story. But it seems as if you are perhaps a little too sensitive because you're getting reviews that aren't babbling "OMG"s and heaping praise upon you. IMO, you had to know that the rape would knock people a little "off kilter" yet you didn't put a warning on the chapter...was it on purpose?
When you started writing fic here, it was fresh and totally different - especially your portrayals of the sexual encounters...but now, the story remains the same even though the surrounding details change. Snape is thrown together with Hermione and Shazam! a masochist (who most of the time doesn't even know she IS one) is born. Where is the wildly unpredictable Ms_Figg that I used to know and read? If anyone finds her, I hope they let me know. You don't need to raise your shields, you just need to see through them a little bit.

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