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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Chavela
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I loved the wedding. I am glad that Hermione and Severus are so happy together, that was wonderful

But I did not liek the ending. It was very good, but I still don't like it. That he would turn out so evil. That was not good, but everything else was.
person tash
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One of the better Snape/Hermoine stories out there. Loved the ending, can't see where this takes you.
person elektrik_storm
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! fantastic! is there going to be a sequel???

please email me! paris@mail2leo.com
person Moyra
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As a first and a last statement: this story was more than intriguing, it was just simply brilliant.

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person Grim
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummmhhh!!! good fic you just went a little down hill at the end.
person mekareami
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for tying up the loose ends... though now I wonder what Bari will be up to. As always thank you very much for writing. It is a joy to see several new chapters on a story per day. I look forward to the next work!
person thing 1
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A darker ending then usual but, let's face it, that's life. Again, a very well written story. I can't wait for the next one!!!
person raven
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fan-frickin-tastic! i love your work.
person sheedy
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another rousing success!
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes. I thought it was about time for a truly dark ending. Bara was a sweet child, but I imagine every despot that ever lived had something good and innocent in them before they became what they were. I imagine Bara's reign will be different from Voldemort in that he does not have wizards and witches under him, no one that could move up in the ranks or take him out with magic. In fact, most likely he would destroy anyone with magical tendencies to protect himself. He is creating an army.

I never really did a dark ending before and as an author I have to explore, otherwise let's face it, writing could become dull for me. I've also never done a sad ending either. One day I am going to have to cross that bridge too, though I can honestly say at this point I'm not looking forward to that. But, I still think it will be some time before I do go that route. I love HG/SS and like to see them with happy endings. But as an author...it's like there is something in me that says, "yeah you like them being happy, but you know it can't always be that way." So I'm waiting for that dragon to raise its head. I'd like to thank everyone for all the reviews given for this story, and for sticking it out to the end. I think something for Halloween is in order next. See you next story. ML. **** Ruth