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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha Basilisk Heart? xD Seems like things are coming full circle. :p
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus losing his basilisk heart to a devious witch. But then again it's probably all for the best. :)
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh Severus you boneheaded male..
person angel
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ..... he really gave it to her and he told her how he feels in a way .. man .. please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Mirrordjyn
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is terrible of me but all I could think about when they were having glorious, glorious sex was "Gee, I wonder if Harry is watching?"

I'm sick! Oh gods.

I love it anyway, thanks :)
person anya
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~Bravo~
This is brilliant. It's so very original; I am fascinated by the Dementors and their victims as Severus saw them, and that scene on the beach ... wow!
~Bravo~
person lola_lola
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, as I do all of your others. But one thing about it really annoys me...the way that severus always calls hermione "witch". It just sounds wierd. It is very annoying to me when a friend always calls me "woman" lol
person Kris
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap!
person angel
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ..i hope albus will be happy when sev tell him about minerva and what she said .. please please please please please update sooon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person DJ
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Karma is a bitch, isn't it Severus. Then again if you had known you would be laid low by that fickle mistress, you never would have let Draco into your rooms. Loved this chapter! Poor Sev had a close brush, glad to see he's okay.