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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Nemesis
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I simply lick arse, now don't I? I really like your fic, though I would have probably made it OOC. I would have had Hermione make Harry choose between her (as his surrogate sister) and Ginny (as his lover). I would have had her show Harry, via Pensieve, how she was loyal to Harry while Ginny abandoned him to bed random men. Honestly, if Ginny cannot suffer Harry's illness (because no one truely knew what he was experiencing), would she be there for him if he had cancer and needed treatment? In my experiences, those who do not make themselves available regularly are rarely present when needed. But that would have made Hermione OOC, and would change the fic. And I like your fics so much I wouldn't want to change them. Though, I thought I'd inform you of my angst regarding one useless Ginerva Weasley.
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!! A pleasant surprise! I had just finished updating my own story, then noticed you had put up another chapte ron yours, so I had to come have a look-see... I love the reunion. The plan Hermione has sounds a little scary, but I love the idea! Sleep well, dream wonderful dreams, and then, come back and write some more at your earliest convenience!

Shiloh
person MysticF
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely heartwarming. I never imagined a way to bring back people who were Kissed. I want to see Minerva again.
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Firewall: Yes, Harry fell right back into his pre-dementor demeanor, but that's where he was when kissed. He was always hostile toward Severus. To think that would change immediately was unrealistic, even if Severus did bring him back (for a small fee). Harry is still very protective of Hermione as if they were still students. Hermione is no longer a child and has a potions degree. She can make her own decisions. Harry is going to have to grow up. That's all there really is to it. Time hasn't passed for him.

Now Ginny. Sigh. It would have been nice if she could have stuck it out like Hermione, but not to make excuses for her, but I can see it being too much for a young witch. Ron had died too...it almost seems she tried to find ways to numb herself...unhealthy ways perhaps to deal with her guilt...sex as an outlet, escape and punishment. Maybe. We'll see what happens in any case. Maybe she'll turn Harry into a freak too. lol
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story, it is so hard to belive that it can just keep getting better, but damn it, it does! I loved this chapter. Just because... I don't know small things leak out that Severus cares, whether it is giving away a precious ingredient or to uphold his duty as her patron and let her do this. I think this is exciting! I totally can not wait till the next chapter! LOL! I say that every time, but it is always so good!

And the best thing... you update ALL the time! LOL!

PEACE♥
Isa
person Cara
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happyyyyy happyyy happy. new chapter!
god you update so fast. one would think you were capable of magic yourself :p
Aw you left us without a lemon. This better be a good one, now. tsk tsk
person takemeaway
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! This story just keeps getting better and better! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
person angel
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ..harry that is one way to scare someone.. man .. i hope mione plan works.... please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read mroe .. later for now

angel
person luce
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been away for a week, and looked forward to coming home and catching up on reading this fanfic the entire time. Can't wait for Harry's music to be completed. Wonder if Severus will have a perve through his mirrors? On to the next chapter...
person Kris
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dun dun DUN DUNNN, man I want ALBUS to see what happened whenever they had to get harry back, the actual ritual. I dont know why, I just do! Oh my, cant wait for more chapters!