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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha, Hermione's gratitude is more like a slow torture!
person angel
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
see she was right you did like it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Chavela
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what Severus has in store for Hermione.
person takemeaway
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a nice and hot lemon. i thoroughly enjoyed it. feel better, figgy.
person Cara
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well you can still write very good lemons when you're under the weather. Hope you feel better. =)
person teri
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Feel better .. and ... erm ... write more!
person Kris
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...MORE MORE MORE!!! =D
person Queeny
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So what does Severus have up his sleeve?
person firewall
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 34 - Hope you are feeling better soon. Another terrific chapter.
person firewall
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 32 - You posted this just before I went to bed...It's 1:43 and I'm wiped but your other story, Daddy Dearest, has caught me and I can't stop reading. Harry is right in the swing of things again, isn't he? Dear, dear, I think they needed a little more male bonding because Harry seems to have forgotten rather quickly what he owes the Potion Master. LOL Anyway I'm off to bed, not as interesting time I'm sure as Severus and Hermione will have...sly wink. Night.