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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
On chapter 11 here - I love your theories - I recognized some of them - thank you for saying what they were at the end. I love doing astrological charts by computer, so easy to rectify!
person pittwitch
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ms. Figg: I loved this story so much I had to go back and read again, and leave a better review. The amount work and detail that you included to flesh out this story is marvelous, and overwhelming. The visions you create are so vivid, so real ... I could feel the sand and hear the surf. The Harper/violin struck a deep resonant chord with me. For quite a while, I sang with an orchestra choir. The altos always rehearsed with the first violin. Geez, when that man played he was transformed, and took us with him on the ride. I swear I could hear that instrument sing under his skilled fingers. As long as I could focus on his playing, it seemed I could follow the most complicated pieces. I have always felt magic from a virtuoso and their chosen instrument. Thank you so much for sharing this story with all of us, but especially me.

For the most part, my mind just cannot wrap myself around a Snape/Hermione 'ship, but your tale wove their characters so well that their pairing became completely believable. I truly lost myself in the story.

You have a true and rare talent.

I wish you success in all your endeavors, Potterverse and otherwise.

Bonnie
person sinbad
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As usual Mrs. Figg an excellent story, but did Bara have to be a bad guy in the end?
person WickedWitch
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! evil little thing to do with Bara though!!! Must write bara's story if you haven't already..
person WickedWitch
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been trying to put off reviewing until I reached the end now that it's finished, but Bara finding Rita Skeeter and attempting to feed her to Precious was just...well PRECIOUS! I'm sure she changes back before it happens, but wouldn't that be sweet justice if you let it happen? LOL!
person Dravana
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That has to be the most well-written story I have had the distinct pleasure in reading. I am so glad that you wrote it. Thanks for adding Eros to the mix towards the end. Plus Bara, a new Dark Lord, nice to say the least. I love the whole history behind it all. This story evoked a far few emotions out of me. Happiness, sadness, extreme satisfaction and wonder. Thanks again for your exquisite writing.

Dravana Dragara
person BrianDarksoul
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Epolouge~
Oh Fuck me sideways. That was a rather unexpected twist. Poor Sev he will be dissapointed.
I am dissapointed in his place. HOW COULD YOU!!!!

Grerat story though.
person Nyxx
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Terrifying the monkeys that inhabited an old temple? LOL Love it!
person wikkidgothbabe
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, BUT...
Oooh how could you make that sweet child the next Voldemort?!?!?!?!
person annie
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit!!!! you made bara the next dark lord?!?!?! whooooa totally DID NOT!! see that one coming!!! haha very nice twist there ms figg very nice indeed!! wow! what a great story!! i'm glad severus and hermione married finally it was gooood..can't wait for the next story!! see you there!!