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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person firewall
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 43 - Harry made a good choice and one that was right for him but it will be devastating to Hermione. That Severus, she really should know better than to let her guard down. hahahahaha
person firewall
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4? - Trust you to drive home the truth...Hermione did enter the patronage deal for Harry. Ginny is definitely a mature witch to be able to be so honest with Harry no matter how much it hurts. I'm glad she didn't leave him right now because he would be left alone since he is still in hiding. Harry is dealing quite well with his lost 8 years although it would be interesting to see how he deals with the wizarding world and its changes.

Poor Hermione. Although she is missing Harry, she needs to experience tender loving Snape style. It may just be what she needs. That was a really touching story, Ms Figg, and the next one promises to be really hot.
person Grim
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome Fic very well writen with all the right moves....Keep going A++++
person Dark Marks and Lemon Drops
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She'll feel loved, because he loves her, right?
Oh! I hope so!

person Queen Celestia
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your Weasley products. No idea how you come up with such funny names and adverts. First it's the licorice whips and candy chains [I think thats what it was] and now it's breath mints. xDD Laughed so hard reading that.
:) And Whoa on Harry. No kidding on Hermione being thrown for a loop!
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I am suddenly strongly reminded of Beauty and the Beast.
Ah and now for my annoying part of this review. :p Will Hermione and Severus get together before the patronage ends, or will they go their seperate ways which will lead to more plotlines and writing?
Dun dun duun. [ok annoying part over]
person annie
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww omg i loooooooooooooooove this story sooooo much!!! you are such a fantastic writer i love coming home everyday and being able to read a new chapter! thank you ms figg!! this story is wonderful!!
person angel
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor mione.. well thin will get better .. now sev know the when it is over she will miss him ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person elektrik_storm
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more! this is soooo good! i love the way you have humanised hermione in this chapter with her jealousy! :)
person takemeaway
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. His library is awesome. LOL at him thinking Hermione had never tasted his ham before. He needs to get over himself, and admit to at least himself he is in love with her. Can't wait for more!