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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person angel
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow sev must be really happy he had mione in his bed and kicked harrys ass ... that was great .. please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person Anguloce
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah Ms_Figg, your stories make me so happy.
person Chavela
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU! GAH Harry gets on my nerves! Just imagining Severus getting him liek that, that was so sexy! Severus is the master of everything! Awesome chapter!

PEACE♥
person Kris
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahahahhaa. Hopefully Harry soon realizes the reason why Severus was really angry, though I seriously doubt it!
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoaaa Hermione totally screwed that up!
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry is his own man. Poor Hermione her life seems like crap right now.. well in some aspects.
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Severus is being sweet to get his own way. :)
person Dark Marks and Lemon Drops
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Severus was absolutely splendid! his interaction with Harry was, as well. The way you are portarying Severus's burgeoning feelings for Hermione is so very in character; and yet, utterly breathtaking.
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Readers: You know it occurred to me when I was writing this story, that a lot of tales involving Severus and Hermione waking up together and going at it never touch on the realities we KNOW exist...like bad breath. Severus' sense of smell plays a big part in this story, he doesn't like to smell anything he deems unpleasant on Hermione...unless its the scent of sex. Yes, the Weasley twins are quite handy. They make anything and everything. :)
person takemeaway
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww what a sad place to leave us :( poor ginny :( and poor mione too. i know her anger stems from jealousy, not from a genuine hatred.