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HAHAHA OMG that was great..... i can just imagine the look on his when his face turned into fabios..... and the fact that hermione could reverse the spell from a distance was hysterical she did not have to wait till the end of work she could have done it at anytime... oh is she ever gonna get it...

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Effing amazing as usual!

What a tremendous story! Wow! I loved it -- there were so many layers. I would have liked to have known if HG/SS had children, but tne ending with Bara was certainly a cliffhanger. Will there be a sequel? The characters in this story were so well-drawn. Your writing is fantastic!

You dont have to take me seriously, but I just like to vent my emotions on paper or with words anyway and I remember the first time I read this story I wanted to write a comment but didnt and now I have to do it. I really really commiserate with Hermione on Harry case and it makes me sooooo mad that Harry didnt have any expectations of Ginny and that Ginny apparently didnt love Harry that much...I guess she loved him, but I think it was more of an adolsecent love and I always felt that she was more infatuated with the idea of Harry as the Boy-Who-Lived, the Hero, the Saviour...I mean she loved him but not enough apparently as she was able to move on and HOW to move on at that...Hermione on the other hand...man, that's a real friend right there, indeed no one expected her to stay by Harry's side and no one would have blamed her had she left him alone either, but she didnt because she loved him truly (in non-physical sense) and was willing to risk anything for him...that is why she finally decided to "sell" her standards and her body...Harry could be more appreciative instead of selfish and ungrateful about it...I mean he thanked her but then when the Ginny situation arose he blew it in her face...I really didn't like him there and then...Yeah, easy for him to judge Hermione (who gave him his life back at so much cost and stayed by his side true and loyal through all the hard times, while Ginny forgot or tried to forget and moved on, and compare situations which are not comparable by the way, since Ginny just threw herself into sexual explorations, enjoying herself with many wizards and Gail (as episode in Cedric's Sypmosium showed), while Hermione was sort of forced into patronage agreement with Severus because of her utlimate desire and willingness to help Harry and do anything at all to restore him. Yeah, she enjoyed Severus' attentions later on, but not before she consciously entered into agreement not knowing how he will treat her but braving her fears and abandoning her principles, all for Harry. I think he should have chosen her over Ginny any day, Ginny was so fast to forget her past and "love" Harry again and Harry too chose Ginny so fast over Hermione and her objections that it made me spitting mad and want to throttle him and that little hussy (I always wanted to say that phrase ^-^* And it made me mad that Hermione felt bad about her words later on and her "loss of friendship" with Harry, she told nothing but the truth and he should be ashamed, not her. I know how the story will develop later on and blah, blah, blah...but I am just so mad right now that I HAD to vent my feelings....I never liked Ginny much period. but at this point I really dont like Harry much either...

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

@68. this story needs a sequel!!!! What a way to end it with Bara becoming a dark lord!!! Very hot story, I loved it!!!

*DB*

DAMN! What are you, a writing fiend?? Wow, another epic story and a dangling end, teasing us with the possiblility of a sequel. Hehehe, great story, unique plot and, again, wonderful character representaion and interaction, not the least of which, all the fantastic smut! Took me two days to read it (68 chapters!) and I enjoyed every word. Thank you for sharing this amazing talent of yours.

4-12-07:
This was an awesome story. I am also reading a number of your other stories (they are all so good!)

Is there a sequel to this one, dealing with the rise and fall of Bara??

-brenna

I have to say the ending was just evil. So cruel of you. But I love it.