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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ewwww. Kissing Dementors is totally squicky! ><
person nessabessa
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as always, your work is fresh and original. i love you!
person nessa bessa
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
snape... is going to hell
person takemeaway
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seriously wanted to puke when she was kissing the dementors.....cried when minerva came back, and laughed my ass off when severus playfully flirted with her....excellent update
person angel
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ to true to true im glad sev will be there to teach bara... man i think minera will be shocked when she hears albus as a ward ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Brian Darksoul
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read upto Chapter 54.
Quite a merry dance you had me doing on emotions.
Harry seems to be taking ron's place as the selfish prick, or is that James's place. e wan'ts his life AND everything else.
Pathetic. I don't like Harry being a selfish little cocksucker.
Then again like father like son. His dad's a fucking bastard and well... The fruit doesn't oft fall far from the tree.

I have sympathy for Sev in this yes he is a cold man but that's all because of the life of pain he went through. As soon as somethimng good comes into his life it gets degraded because harry can't stand to see snape happy. Snape fucking benyt over bacxkwards and laids aside a personal vendetta to bring the ungratefiul little bastard back from vegefdom and what does the littlre cunt do? shit on him! I prefer it if Harryt remained dead like voldemort. Ya got rifd of ron the asshole now ya got harry the spitefull bastard whom thinks the sun shines out his asshole. Normally LIKE harry but this story's harry? I hope dies of STD'S at this time. I loathe wankers that think they are gods gift and harry in this one is acting like it subcontouslly!
person anya
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate it when this happens with your compelling fic ... getting to where there isn't another chapter yet ... it's so disappointing!
person Orion Travers
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I wanna know what happens lol. I think it serves Harry right to have his letters unanswered, I can see where he's coming from but Hermione speaks her mind no matter the subject and way before his soul was broken, he shouldn't of skipped out like he did *shakes head at him* Stupid boy. Well I am in absloute love with this story, can't wait for a new chapter!
person Kris
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG THATS THE WORST CLIFFE EVER... EVER!!! *hits head on desk repeatedly*... MORE CHAPTERS NOW!!! XD
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just the thought of a Dementor Niffler makes me laugh. xD So the entire time I was like "teeheehee"
And yes, Severus is pretty naughty.