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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person annie
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
such a beautiful story!! i love this couple so much! that you for writing them so beautifly! i love this story!! and i do hope you'll update more quickly like you used to! but if not it's ok i love this story so much!! thank you~!
person firewall
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 57 - Things are moving along very quickly now! Severus will be having trolls if Hermione catches him baring his ass or other parts in the magazine! Mind you this could be interesting if Hermione ever gets access to the internet and checks out Severus on the Playwitch site! WhoooHooo!
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a teriffic story. I am enjoying each and every chapter, keep going please.
person Linda
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, so good! Not just the sex, which was awesome...but the emotions...you sure know how to write. I love them both, and they belong together. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Kris
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmmmmmm, cant wait to see the people's reactions to the docu pensieves(?) XD
person Cara
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about you...but when I get wet, I can feel it but I can't feel any gushes coming out. You make Hermione sound like a fountain.
It's also irritating how easily seduced she is.
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cara: She IS a fountain. lol. She hasn't had any in what ... 4 months? Easily seduced? Yah, I would think so, particularly since Severus does it for her every time and he hasn't touched her in ages. It's been a long time...but I remember those little gushes way back when. Maybe not everyone gets them...I'm not an expert in that area...but some women do, otherwise there was something wrong with my plumbing. :)
person anya
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TODAY is friday. Shouldn't Severus be with Hermione?
Great press conference!
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for restored friendship!
person angel
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheh that wait well ... i love how sev can manipulate to get what he wants .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more..later for now

angel