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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Cara
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter too bad it was short.
wouldn't mind seeing severus in playwitch though lol.

maybe i have a problem with my plumbing o.o
im sure snape could fix it. *wink wink*
ohhh drama in the houseee. i really hope they stay together, either way keep writing great stories ;)
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hermione should really get those panti liners if that keeps up. .. Which it will.
person takemeaway
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a nice chappie. loved how severus was so aloof to the reporters
person reviewer
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cara, I know what you are talking about, but I, like ms figg, have also had the gushes lol. I distinguish them by being turned on a little, or being REALLY turned on.
person angel
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ... they are both thinking along the same line... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person septentrion
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 57: so far, this story is one of my favourite of yours.
person takemeaway
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh would i love to see that spread hehe. if you actually go to the playwitch.com website, you can see a spread of a photomanipulated severus with alabaster skin and scars, who is hung like a stallion. makes a nice accompaniment to this hehe, it also insinuates he is involved with mione.......
person elektrik_storm
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor hermione, poor severus... lets hope that it all works out ok!
person Kris
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Next thing we know, there both posing in Playwitch, together. Man... that would be hott... *drools* XD
person hermoine said so
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read ur new chapter and think it's bloody wicked. i really can't wait until the next one. i hope they stay together if both of them deny that they like each other it will tear them appart inside.