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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person CB13
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg, so sneaky! I look forward to this tale's resolution. Thank you for writing so well; I read earlier in the reviews how you don't use a beta. Sweetie, unlike so many writers (myself included), you don't really need one. Cheers!
person Jan
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OhMyGods! This is one of the best story ever.
Can't wait to see what happens when Severus goes to his house on the weekend, and see what both he and Hermione are going to do about their feelings.
Can't wait till your next update hope it's SOON. ^_^
Keep up the great work ^_^
person bluedecor
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...so hot, Ms. Figg! Is the next chapter the one where Severus tells Hermione he won't let her go?
person BrianDarksoul
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was an intense 57-58.
I don't blame Severus for his snippiness
on the potter front. I wish he was allowed to curse potter with impotence forever aka Cannot Get it up!

The little bastard is milking his so called innocence for all he's worth. Actually I do hope Hermoiune allows Sevvie to gpo through with the playwitch thing. Then she can turn around and tell those bitchres to nback off she's His pet NOT them! and insinuatrew trhat only inteligent and beautruiful witvches may be allowed in the I fuck a well hung harper club.

I hope Luna Lovregood joins the IFAWHHC true she may not be conventionally inteligent but that was due to mosyt probablly her powers and or a time turner swallowed in youth.

Still holding out hope thast Ginny and Gail join Hermoine in the Harper or Potion Master appreciation club, or I just got royally shagged by Shagadellic Snape. Damn Austinb Powers hasn't got a bar nexct to outr snarky slythrerin babemagnet Eh?

I know it sounds like I am demanding Snape be pimp master extrodinare? But I am not really Considering all his life has been full of misery and pain he deserves a few willing witches to be his comfort and Hermoine to be theire den mother. Yes I am a perverted kinky bastard. I vote Bara join the Sev side I mean he took Severus's advice(even if thinly veiled as sarcasdm) to hreart. I vote Basra demand to be Severus's son

I know I know i'm a sentimental fool bringing broken people together in order to heal their scars. But I can't sodding help it.

Bloody brilliant fanfic sofar!
BrianDarksoul
person lisa
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg lol yay finally. if only to be in Hermione's place. Well at least he gave her a few moments to ask her questions before he pounced lol. again if only to be in her place. Severus is quite delicious. more please. Good chappie. Please update soon.
person Kris
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I saw that stopping there, dont know why, just did. XD MORE MORE MORESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS PLZNTHANKYOUS!
person angel
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. now that mione got ther awnser about sev and his duel with harry out of the way the can spend time together.. hmm will mione find out about sev's meeting ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

angel
person Cara
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think they should have worked things out first, then fucked, but the sequence doesn't really matter.
the interview will be interesting....i wonder if that brenda will try and make a move on him.
and will hermione spy on him during the interview?
because i would love to see her reaction to the questions i think brenda will ask. yuh anyway. short but sweet chapter.
person Chavela
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well now that it has come to the point of it ending, I am hoping that Severus does make it work.

At least he believes her when she said she loves him, I just wonder if she will believe it herself.
Good chapter!

PEACE
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I think Hermione would walk out on him if he did pose for Playwitch