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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Jan
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I mean WOW; Love it, love this story can't wait for the next chapter.
I really do hope that Sev. does the pose for Playwitch, that would really be interesting.^_^
PLEASE UPDATE SOON..........................................................................
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person Bonnie
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH Goodness, Adam and Victor ride again!

I so enjoy finding your updates. Send the kids to school and settle in with my morning coffee to see what your pair is doing today!

THANK YOU!

P.W.
person sheedy
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, my favorite supporting character is back!!!! Yay Sweetmeats!!!! I always enjoy your work.
person lisa
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol omg those chappies were great. and the last was so funny. Well they finally have a workable,in-trasiton deal but I see Severus concessing more so deep down he loves Hermione. hmm maybe something needs to happen to shake him up beore he'll tell Hermione he loves her too. lol he's so Slytherin and devious and delicious. Love the story.more please. Update soon. lo I cannot believe Severus held his wand from Adam asking him about his length. And I cannot wait to see Severus decision and how Hermione reacts. Update soon again. thanks.
person angel
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. adam is somthign els .. i think mione will get a few laughs out of it when sev tell her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person BrianDarksoul
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh That photographer had best watch his well meaning comments. Hopefully his Deathpartner can soothe Severus's ire right now so his 'Queen' won't do something that will drastically shorten his unlife.
Severus is VERY touchy about his appearance even for a straight guy. Impressive new chapters though!
person amaria
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!I love this fic,its just so good!!I also love the way that you update on a regular basis.I hate it when your half way through a fic and then all off a sudden there isnt an update for months or even (shock horror)never again!
*cries from the memory of so many unfinished fics,looks around guiltily,quickly recovers pretending shes fine*
*sniff*
person Sampdoria
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, and that you don't make us wait forever for updates. I'm usually careful about reading such long stories that ain't complete, not knowing if the author will finish the story or not, but with your progress (and your fantastic plot), I look forward to each new chapter.
Just one thing, I sure hope you don't let Severus beeing pictured in "Playwitch", the Hermionie living in my mind would never forgive such betrayal to the relationship. I hate it when authors make this (all in my mind) smart, courages, wonderful woman, and make her out to be some shivering "nutbrain" more suitable for a Barbara Cartland story than a HP-fanfiction.
Keep up the good work:-)
person takemeaway
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice update, loving the citrus
person Chavela
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 58!

*melts*
Severus looked at Hermione