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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweetmeatsaphobe?! xD Yes, he does seem to be that.
person isabel
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best hermione x severus stories i have ever read your such a talented writer have you ever thought of actually writing something based on your own idea's? it'd probably be good enough to sell

xox bel
person elektik_storm
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more soon! yay!
person lisa
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes indeed Severus seems to be growing. and I guess Hermione is old fashioned due to her muggle heritage. I'd never turn n Severus down lol. but It's great she is being true to herself and has told him her intentions and feelings. It almost seems she is trying to goad him to make a decison but not really. Severus can't ault her for being honest and having morals. I just hope things tiurn out ok. It would be sad for them to part. it seems ti might be leading up to some conflict soon though. I just can't wait to see what happens. more please. Update soon please. I love this story and this Severus is awesome. He's my most favorite and seems the closest to canon than i have seen in a while. kudos.
person yanna
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A masterpiece.
person angel
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. in glad he is telling her about his past .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please upadate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Chavela
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 59!

Well I am very glad that they touched upon their relationship. But I do have to admit, that I am not sure if someone said the VERy wrong thing to me after I had asked a serious question...if them fucking me would get rid of my anger. And that damn fast. No...

I have never frowned while reading something of yours... that part though, just was not right. I am young, but not so young that I would ever in a million years let someone keep at it, if they had literally just pissed me off while on top of me. No, not cool.

But the rest of the chapter was very very very good! Loved it, just not that part.
person Chavela
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 60!

Awesome to see Adam and Viktor! I love them!
person Chavela
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 61!

Wow! Wife, children! What is that going to do to Severus!? LOL!

Great chapter!
person Cara
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I would feel the same way as Hermione. You can't have a relationship based purely on sex, with one person loving and the other not.