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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person firewall
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It makes sense that Severus, a dark wizard, would use dark magic to determine if he loves. Gotta love lemons that masquerade as ancient rituals. LOL
person Jan
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! A ritual that requires sex to be completed, I was hoping one of these from the moment you first mention it when Hermione asked Severus about the symbols in the cards.^_^*_*
Please update soon
person takemeaway
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe i smell an orchard up ahead
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The young wizards living in the same building as Hermione drove him to it!

But yes, Severus is being rather stubborn.
person Mme Snape
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!!! I love it. It is quite possibly the hottest story I have ever read! Keep up the GREAT work. Please write another chapter as quickly as you possibly can.
person Cara
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!
it's the daddy of all cliffhangers!
let's see let's see let's see let's see. i would love to have sex in a library. i could read stephen king and orgasm!
lol.
i don't think i have to tell you to update. you're very good about that. =)
person takemeaway
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice and tender beginning, and i was seriously rofl at the end hehe keep up the good work
person angel
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ i love it .... and the he told mione he said not to the shoot and why ... i hope he dose take the next step .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more

angel
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The moment I read the "sort of" I knew who the photographer was! XD
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go Hermione!