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person Batten
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww! So adorable! XD Keep up the good work! IO hope to see more chapter of this sometime ^_~
person roxierose13
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw, it's cute :) And I know the feeling of no reviews. I think it's just people being too lazy to press the button and write something. Either that or they're afraid to say something. But really, any kind of comment is nice! We should tell them that... lol

So yeah, your fic. I used to not like any other pairing other than H/D but I admit that Remus/Sirius is growing on me, though only the marauder era fics. I kinda like Sirius/James too, though I can't bring myself to write it, lol. Anyway, I like this fic. I was kind of hoping for a little more action, but I understand you need to set the stage and 3 chapters really isn't that much anyway, lol. I'll be looking forward to more, though I might miss it since I rarely venture into this section ;)
person Shardae
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Add soon...
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo for the shower! Loved that part! This was a great chapter! Remus didn't think to do magic! lol Great chapter, can't wait for the next!
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this chapter! You did a grate job with it! Can wait to read the next chapter!